As an environmental science major and
avid tree-hugger, I believe it is incredibly important to teach kids about preserving
the natural world. Throughout college, I have volunteered with organizations connecting
inner-city youth to the great outdoors in life-changing ways. Environmental education programs allow kids to engage all of
their senses while unearthing the wonders of nature. Kids’ eyes light up as they develop connections
with the earth, by simply biting into a hand-picked cherry tomato or attempting
to catch the elusive butterfly. These “Aha!” moments, kids’ beautiful, raw
realizations about the world, influenced my decision to serve in the Memphis
Botanic Garden’s education department. The dedicated MBG education staff strives
to build and strengthen kids’ connections with the natural world in hopes that
these students, our nation’s future leaders, will someday serve as knowledgeable
and progressive stewards of the earth.
I experienced many aspects of MBG’s
environmental education program. I created and implemented camp curriculum,
facilitated various eco-themed classes (my favorites of which included Jungle
Adventures, Fruits and Veggies, and Pollinators), led a few pirate-themed
birthday parties, and managed activities at community events such as Sweet
Treat Sunday and International Mud Day. I learned how to present educational material
in fun, proactive ways, creatively and effectively collaborate with my co-workers,
and patiently interact with youngsters under
the blazing Memphis sun (*change wording*). I not only gained a better understanding of
the challenges non-profits face, I also witnessed the dedication,
collaboration, and ingenuity MBG staff demonstrated to overcome such obstacles.
At my site, I witnessed the unique intersection between the issues of
education, access, and sustainability. To ensure the health and well-being of
future generations, communities must establish and teach their children
about sustainable environmental practices. However, environmental education is
a privilege. Generally, it is inaccessible to those who lack the means and information
required to improve their environment, namely folks from low socioeconomic
backgrounds. Access to natural spaces and associated curriculum requires
financial investment and time, precious resources that many classrooms
cannot spare. By reaching out to
local schools and community organizations, MBG works tirelessly to overcome
this disparity and ensure that all children in Shelby County have access to meaningful
environmental education.
I pursued SSF because I wanted to
contribute my passion for the environment, but this experience has opened my
eyes to so much more. Through our weekly meetings, my MBG duties, and personal
reflection, I have developed a deeper appreciation for this vibrant, scrappy
city, a unique place that shares in the struggles and triumphs of its
inhabitants (*change wording*). I
have learned about issues
affecting our community and society at large, engaged with dynamic leaders
striving to promote positive change, and helped create a more
sustainable community through the power of education. I am proud to have volunteered at MBG, a community
cornerstone which provides indispensable services in a city which has taught
me so much.
I would like to thank the incredible folks in the MBG education department who embraced me and taught me an
enormous amount about environmental education. I would also like to thank
Sandi, Beverly, Scott, and Shauni for serving as our fearless leaders and
showing us diverse aspects of this extraordinary city. And lastly, I am
grateful to all of the summer service fellows – I have learned so much
vicariously through your blog posts and our conversations, I can’t wait to see
what y’all do next.
Catherine, I really enjoyed reading your blog. I didn't quite realize how many responsibilities you had at MBG, and I was really interested to read about all of them and how you were able to contribute so significantly. My only suggestions for this piece would be to perhaps shorten it a bit -- it is very interesting, but I think that you could get the same message across with a few less details and by condensing some information and reflection. Also, the last paragraph seems a little bit unnecessary to me. I appreciate the grateful attitude and think it adds a nice tone to the end of the piece, but think that there may be a better way to achieve this effect than thanking people individually. Overall, great post.
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ReplyDeleteThis was an absolutely beautiful blurb - your vocabulary truly paints a clear picture at what you aim to communicate! I would encourage you to condense the first two paragraphs into one. I agree with Hannah that the final paragraph could be shortened to roughly a sentence. My last suggestion would be to add either a few sentences or a small paragraph on what service means to you. With these changes your blurb will be perfect! Excellent job!
You are very successful in painting a picture of your past experience, current responsibilities at MBG, and your growth throughout summer service. A simple way to condense this blurb would to make some of the longer sentences more concise. There are a few that may be more effective in simpler, shorter writing. Overall, you are a really great write; this reflective blurb flows extremely well.
ReplyDeleteCatherine - Your blurb was delightful to read, not only because of the lovely way you expressed your responsibilities at MBC, but also because your enthusiasm for education, the environment, and the value you place on those "aha" moments truly shines through. Although it could definitely be condensed, when revising make sure you don't lose any of the personality and sincerity that this post certainly has.
ReplyDeleteGreat post! I loved your opening paragraph, and I think that it really communicated clearly why you chose to do SSF. I would love to hear a bit about how your idea of service changed throughout the summer, but otherwise I think it's excellent!
ReplyDeleteGreat post! I loved your opening paragraph, and I think that it really communicated clearly why you chose to do SSF. I would love to hear a bit about how your idea of service changed throughout the summer, but otherwise I think it's excellent!
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